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Lonesome Star

This song was created for Game of Bands round 96 : "Odd Times and No Rhymes III"

Lyrics:




Intro – 0:00 to 0:17

Verse 1 – 0:17 to 0:32

Lonely, I am
with you near me
the vast oceans
pulls me below
I'm surrounded
Feel your arms near
And you're pulling
i can't follow

Pre-Chorus 1 – 0:32 to 0:48

It's a grand affair
-5-
all you people he-
re around me
but i'm all alone
-5-
every where I am

Chorus 1 – 0:48 to 1:03

Oh god
my god
have you
forsaken me

here i am
on my own
what else can i do

Verse 2 – 1:03 to 1:18

Oh dreg I am
you discard me
where could I go
family calling
you may hold tight
i drift away
just who I am
the void is me

Pre chorus 2 – 1:18 to 1:34

It's a grand affair
all you people
here around me
but i'm all alone
every where I am

Chorus 2 – 1:34 to 1:49

every day
new day
but i'm
so
un - luck - y

rather be
exact
the peice in my hand

Bridge – 1:49 to 2:20

I try so hard
Don't you listen
I am trying
to be diffrent
Can't you tell dear
I'm all better
I'm so happy
I'm the real me

I try so hard
Don't you listen
I am trying
to be diffrent
Can't you tell dear
I'm all better
I'm so happy
am I real

Verse 3 – 2:20 to 2:35

You cant save me
I must fade 'way
dont you come near
I need some space
it's all for naught
each thing i do
it just wont take
i lack the faith


Prechorus 3 – 2:35 to 2:51

It's a grand affair
all you people here around me
but i'm all alone
every where I am

Chorus 3 – 2:51 to 3:06

One day
I say
I will
be ha-ppy

here i am
on my own
what else could i do

Verse 4 – 3:06 to 3:21

An absent being
of no value
nothing at all
I'm so sorry
please forgive me
ever you could
got no prospects
and no future

prechorus 4 – 3:21 to 3:37

It's a grand affair
all you people
here around me
but i'm all alone
every where I am

Chorus 4 – 3:37 to end

Oh god
my god
won't you
end me
I don't want
to be here
what more could
I do



[Exit]

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