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Bitter Remains

This song was created for Game of Bands round 218 : "Saddest Song"


This breath, it’s pain
Cut across my tender wound
Every tick, cold and grey
Towards the end of you
Far apart, now we’re close
Sipping bitter remains
Fumes, smoke, the green of home,
One blink, you’re ripped away

My tears fall, drops of blood
Fallen down upon the floor,
You feared you’d linger,
One moment, and gone

You’ll always be my home

Can I have one more day?
A piece to keep inside
When you were over the ditch,
I couldn’t give you the time
Running through childhood memories,
Can’t abet regret
You were meant to live
But I let our time fall through the sieve


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